306 words. Too long
Nowadays, people want to own more things than ever.
Some people believe that it is just because of advertising in spite of real
needs in current societies. However, I think that there are more than one
reason behind this reality. Modern lifestyle is fast, consequently consumer
goods are answers to make it easier. That is why, people want to have those
things.
First of all, it is pivotal to be aware of our current
way of living, because it is very demanding of time and effort. Hence, people
want to make life as easy as possible. As a result of it, scientists have
designed lots of new things which help people to do daily activities. With
publicity or without it things such as cell phones and refrigerators solve
problems in a short and efficient way. Thus, it is natural that people want
this kind of thing; they had become into real needs.
Nonetheless. The brands that people are used to buying
depend almost 1% on advertisements. For instance, some people only buy Apple
devises. They think that Apple products are better than others because most of
the time movies show people using this brand. Maybe some Apple stuffs are very
good ones, but there are people who have never tried other brands, because their
blindly believe in publicity. Thus, there are some popular consumer goods which
are essential in people routine, nevertheless sometimes people buy one brand
due to its marketing campaign.
In conclusion, I am not in favor of the reason why people
want to have more things is just because they are prey of marketing. In my
opinion, many popular goods make life effortless to deal with demands.
Although, some people rather to buy a specific brand or think that a brand is
the best one just because they have watched it by media.
A good one. I think that you should not use a comma before "becuase"
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