Some people think that a sense of
competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who
are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both views and give own
opinion.
280 words, 33 minutes.
There are interesting exchanges of arguments whether
it is better for children to be persuaded into the sense of competition or co-operability,
in order to reach success in the adulthood. It is a complicated issue which
deserves a deeply evaluation before offering an opinion.
We live in a competitive world in which the pace of
life is faster every day; then it is essential to give to younger people the
necessary tools to face this lifestyle. That is why, it is fundamental to help
children to learn to do their best, and try to work better than others to find
good works and wages when they become older. However, it has some drawback such
as children might be stressed and have problems to make friendships because they
are always in a competition that does not have a chance to feel confident with
partners.
Nevertheless, most of works need a team to be done in
a proper way, and people who do not know work with others will have troubles
to do good tasks. For those reasons, it is pivotal to teach children to work
together in a single aim, because it is the way for them to learn to deal with and support each other. Even if, it is an important element that young people
learn to make as best work as possible, it is only possible for them who
are able to work with a team.
In conclusion, from my point of view, both things are
important, so children need to learn to be competitive but working in groups
with the same goal; it is the way to be sure about they would be ready for
future.
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