Monday, 3 January 2011

"Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 The first IELTS's essay in paper and pencil!

There has long been a debate over if the fatherhood is as important as their motherhood in the develop of child. Each child need a caregiver to live but still that is not enough to feel good and happy.

Many people think, the mothers are more important in the develop of child, because, the other can give life and are a lot of lovely and can feed the babies only with theirs owns bodies. Have a good mother is very important to have mental and physical health, and every people need it to have a good life.

However the persons needs a father to have a better develop, because, in this way, the kid have more support in theirs important problems, and have two people to offer directions, help, love, care, company, rules and a lot of necessaries things for the life. Recent research has found, the people with mother and father committed with them during theirs childrenhood are most happy, with better working life, better families and with lower rates of divorce. In this way, researchers found that men with good father will be betters fathers in the future.

Furthermore, the humans only can have babies with mother and fathers, both needs to be present to do baby in the beginning, and for this reason both have similarly responsibility about the children. If each kid has mother and father they could have most possibilities to achieve better develop and know to be responsible with their decisions.

In conclusion, although the people can love without a father, have mother and father could help them to have better develop, and be most happy and responsible with theirs decisions.

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